the primary reason to get an education is to succeed financially

INTRODUCTION: The reason I get an education is to be successful financially

PARAGRAPH SUPPORT 1: To gain knowledge
(Example): Using science for work needs
(Reason): It takes work to be successful financially
(Personal story): When I use the knowledge I get when I am in school for work, I will get good finances in my company.

PARAGRAPH SUPPORT 2: For families
(Example): financial success is not just for yourself
(Reason): because there are parents who pay for the school
(Personal story): when I get success in financial terms I do not forget the services of my parents

CONCLUSION: science is very important to gain financial success from work

INTRODUCTION 1

Yes I know that education can not guarantee us to be rich, but it also depends on luck but with education at least we have a greater chance to be successful than people without education.